Days have passed by….nights disappeared
I am standing at the very same place
Everything is transformed and new
A dead still alive I keep waiting for u
Scrawny thread connecting us broke
With a gentle stroke of breeze…
But still I love you more than ever.
Things that created magic in our life has ended
Poignancy of knowing all this time u just pretended
To be mine as whole, but
I feel obliged to u for bestowing me with a world
That I’ll cherish all my life
I thought these moments would end never
Still I love you more than ever
You were so close to me
I could hardly think of parting away
I saw the love in your eyes
Was that all a mere play?
You deserted me for a reason unsaid
I know its easy for you to forget,
Loving you was not a decision clever
But still I love you more than ever.
Your love is now the cause of my pain
Things have scattered m going insane
It’s a constant ache still I hold u inside
Wna leave but ur always beside,
I still think of those times
I am standing at the very same place
Everything is transformed and new
A dead still alive I keep waiting for u
Scrawny thread connecting us broke
With a gentle stroke of breeze…
But still I love you more than ever.
Things that created magic in our life has ended
Poignancy of knowing all this time u just pretended
To be mine as whole, but
I feel obliged to u for bestowing me with a world
That I’ll cherish all my life
I thought these moments would end never
Still I love you more than ever
You were so close to me
I could hardly think of parting away
I saw the love in your eyes
Was that all a mere play?
You deserted me for a reason unsaid
I know its easy for you to forget,
Loving you was not a decision clever
But still I love you more than ever.
Your love is now the cause of my pain
Things have scattered m going insane
It’s a constant ache still I hold u inside
Wna leave but ur always beside,
I still think of those times
held you so close,intoxicated with love,
Knowing all the time it would end,
And you’d be gone forever.
Still I love u more than ever...
poonam
my lauds yaar... i've seldom seen people express deir pain so vividly n beautifully..
ReplyDeleteplus yr poem reflects maturity on a level few r (un)lucky enuff 2 attain
al of us hav felt d pain of drifting apart frm freinds wit time .. bummmer :P
nice work....is it inspired frm some poem which we have read...??...aint sure ...but it is a fabulous work odawise..very mature!
ReplyDeletethis poem m sure will touch everyones heart ,reading it....
ReplyDeletehey can you tell me from which poem you got inspired if i m not wrong its from sir welth luis de bresko documentary. do let me know ..is that true..
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